poems written on the fly

four day wait

In art, audio, d. james, literature, poem, poetry, writing on 19 July 2010 at 12:38 pm

counting the days
until
we are together

this
the last time
we will be separated

seems longer
than all the others

how can twenty years
apart
seem shorter
than
the next four days?

(D. James)

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  1. Your poem made recall similar feelings…anticipation seems to slow time down to a crawl…love the way you represent this in your poem.

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