It all started
last month
when I …
No wait
it goes back
before that
three years ago
when she …
Actually it was
when he said …
but that would have
been ten years
or more now
So it must have been
as far back as before all
that and further still
when I was just a child
Yes, of course
it all began at
the beginning
which would be
the day before
I was born
Or even before
that when my father …
(D. James)
I rather like your poetry. Very simple yet eloquent. I like it. Keep writing.
wonderful, confusional, hypnotic time travel. enchanting.