Disposable Poetry

poems written on the fly

Home blues

Posted by sdoubinsky on 23 February 2007

Surrounded by laughing children
I watch a distant TV
while my mother
cooks a familiar meal

Nothing here is unknown to me
yet many questions remain
such as the weather tomorrow
and why are our bones so white

EL SEBBO

3 Responses to “Home blues”

  1. sinkokraul Says:

    very nice
    and the last line: really effective.

  2. DJNIC Says:

    I no wot u talkin’ about dude. djn

  3. the individual voice Says:

    so “kid”

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